I am a Year 8 student at Redhill School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kereru Hub and my teacher is Mrs Kereopa and Mr Mahlagwai. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thank you for sharing your information about war. I found it really hard to read your information. Next time you should check out the preview to see if it will fit on your blog. I would also like to know more about the role of the army today, what do they do?
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Thank you for sharing your information about war. I found it really hard to read your information. Next time you should check out the preview to see if it will fit on your blog. I would also like to know more about the role of the army today, what do they do?
ReplyDeleteI think I will make it smaller so it could look better in my blog and find out more information.
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