I am a Year 8 student at Redhill School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kereru Hub and my teacher is Mrs Kereopa and Mr Mahlagwai. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
What do I think about Donald Trump building the wall between Mexico and United States?
I think that Donald Trump is pretty abusive to the Mexicans because some of them did nothing to the Untied States. Donald Trump built the wall because he didn't want any foreingers.
I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
You have made some really strong statements and have created a really interesting blog post but please make sure you read the activities carefully before posting to see if you have done what the activity asks.
This activity asks you to talk about the wall and whether it is a good or bad idea and why. I am really glad you have put effort into this post and hope you will continue next week with as much enthusiasm.
I’m looking forward to seeing more posts from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Justyce,
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
You have made some really strong statements and have created a really interesting blog post but please make sure you read the activities carefully before posting to see if you have done what the activity asks.
This activity asks you to talk about the wall and whether it is a good or bad idea and why. I am really glad you have put effort into this post and hope you will continue next week with as much enthusiasm.
I’m looking forward to seeing more posts from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel