I am a Year 8 student at Redhill School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kereru Hub and my teacher is Mrs Kereopa and Mr Mahlagwai. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
hi Justyce its Clinton from papakura central school you made a really good slide maybe next time you should make it a bit more interesting or add more detail from Clinton
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hi Justyce its Clinton from papakura central school
ReplyDeleteyou made a really good slide maybe next time you should make it a bit more interesting or add more detail
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